AFL

Peer Assessment By Katie & Kam



framing a shot, including and excluding elements as appropriate - level 3 - good style and looks professional


using a variety of shot distances as appropriate - level 3/4- good variety of shots which suit the pages


shooting material appropriate to the task set- level 3 - props go well and Rob looks suitable for target audience


selecting mise-en-scene including colour, figure, lighting, objects and setting - level 3 - outfits are good and tie into the genre, lighting on all pictures is suitable and thought out



manipulating photographs as appropriate to the context for presentation, including cropping and resizing - level 4 - good cutting out, very precise.


accurately using language and register- level 4 - no spelling errors etc on draft article or front cover


appropriately integrating illustration and text- level 3 - everything is relevant and not overcrowded


showing undestanding of conventions of layout and page design - level 3/4 - good layout with everything spaced out


showing awareness of the need for variety in fonts and text size - level 3 - variety of fonts and colours, maybe use a different shade of blue.



using ICT appropriately for the task set - level 4 - good use of photoshop to manipulate each page.





Other Comments - Contents is looking a bit plain but with a proper background done it should tie into the other pages.